Comments : Forgetting my past

  • 5 years ago

    by Khalid

    Nice poem full of realities! We do learn from our mistakes and no one knows what's hidden in the future but rather should be optimistic. I liked much the stanza that says
    Hope is in the future
    To live a better life
    But we must realize
    There will always be hurt and strife

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Great flow and rhyme with a great closing couple of lines. Well done.