Comments : Sisterhood

  • This is such a beautiful heartfelt poem!
    I only wish my relationship with my sister was this strong and beautiful - sadly it's no one close.

    One minor thing;
    'eachother' is two words - 'each other'
    (there are two instances of this in the poem)

    Flawless rhyming; the flow was perfect.
    The opening was just right, and so was the ending.

    Well penned. 5/5

  • 11 years ago

    by Khalid M Darwish

    Nice piece i loved it. Excellent rhyming except for the last stanza:
    To be sisters you must smile
    Every time she does
    Because there's nothing better
    Than happiness and love

  • 11 years ago

    by Marvellous

    What matters to one, he keeps close. He who makes out time for you, cares.