Comments : Let me

  • 13 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    This is sooo cute dude! :) but it kinda needs a little help here and there lol

    • 13 years ago

      by Steven Croat

      Thank you! :)
      If youfound some mistake please write them!

  • 13 years ago

    by LittleMermaid

    Short one but sweet.
    i enjoyed reading it!
    keep writing!
    *_*

    • 13 years ago

      by Steven Croat

      Thank you for reading and commenting!:)

  • 13 years ago

    by Rachit Bhanage

    Loved it !

  • 12 years ago

    by rock serenade

    For a first english poem of yours it's great

    liked it keep up chum ;)