Great write Kirsty, I love the metaphorical links you have made between the rose and a lover. You have used many captivating descriptions which allow he reader into your thoughts and create for us a visual image through the words You composed.
You have lured me in with The caps reinforcing strong emotions.
I found that the ending was a great finish and a strong one that makes the reader think wow!
Loved the read
5.5 from me

Yeah I love this piece