To be honest with you, both stanzas are beautiful, yet I found the 1st one to be so artistic, so original.................... no words to express, really...

!! beautiful ~~

Jacey, it's been awhile since I have been able to read your work and this piece was really amazing. The emotions you pour into this piece are very powerful and the imagery is really great. I love the the way your wrote this poem as I found it to be a great work of art as the poem paints art all of its own. I am happy to know that you are finally with someone who loves and cares about you. You deserve the best and nothing less!!

I didn't pick a favorite stanza because I loved them both equally and I believe they are both need in this poem and go hand in hand, flowing right from one to another. Your creativeness and metaphors are simply amazing and your style has always stood out to me and always had a impact on me.

This, as all your other poetry, is amazing and nothing less. I realize this may be nothing more than a vent of love filled emotions from your heart but also may be more as a expressing of all you are and also a wanting to paint a picture of how you feel and how he makes you feel. Anyway, I am glad to see that you are still writing some. Great job and keep writing!!

I have never read your work, either that or I don't remember reading it before so I thought it was about time I did. I'm happy I read this. It's like a breath or fresh air. It is beautiful. You worded this lovely and gave it a warm feel. 5/5 :-)

Danika.

This is a beautiful poem. Love is a splendid thing that can't be matched. Though many things might try and stop you. Time makes love strong and everyone becomes closer than ever. 5/5