Comments : I'm Done Trying

  • 11 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I know its a vent. Just a vent. A weird vent, but its important to do so. Its important though cause without venting does nothing but eat your soul up...

    And I really dont know why I read it or why I liked it but i did. So nice piece in a way

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    I agree with HBP. This piece is a good vent as it helped you flush off all your deep frustation or feelings.
    And you rhymed it well.
    Keep writing(:

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    I agree with HBP. This piece is a good vent as it helped you flush off all your deep frustation or feelings.
    And you rhymed it well.
    Keep writing(:

  • 11 years ago

    by Amreen

    I agree with HBP. This piece is a good vent as it helped you flush off all your deep frustation or feelings.
    And you rhymed it well.
    Keep writing(:

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    What do you mean this isn't one of your best, this had so much emotion it was outstanding, it was magnifying, splendid, I'm gonna read it again

    I'm sorry but I'm wondering, did everything turn out alright between you and your wife?!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Loved it again