Comments : Can You be mine..??

  • 6 years ago

    by Amreen

    Fantastic. I really loved the questioning and this poem speaks of true emotions...
    Well done my friend.
    typo: wisper should be whisper(:
    Keep writing

  • 6 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Really well wrote, I love your style, it calls out, I enjoyed reading it, great poem

  • 6 years ago

    by Mams

    Hey amreem thanxx alot for corecting ma mistake..;) thanxx for reading cathy butterfly n amreen