Okay, here's my thoughts on this.

I'm not much on Dark Poetry, and I honestly think this one belongs under the Sad: depression category, but it was good. It shows what most girls go through because of what the media sees as beautiful, when in reality, all women are beautiful.

Suggestion: this reads like a long paragraph, I'd tryy putting it into stanza's by two or three lines.

Overall:
this was a good read, I enjoyed it.
4/5

I really liked this piece as it talks on so many things and gives a deep insight.
Keep penning:)