On point

Oh, it's awesome one. so nice. i like it
You don't care
I've tried my best
Please just lay me to rest

Reading your poem makes me outright angry with a father who is cold and distant from his own flesh'n'blood daughter.your poem made me FEEL that.i like the poem but more so would like to send you a "banana-head" hat to give to your father as a token of your estimation of his wherewithal to showing loving-kindness