Comments : Goodbye

  • 11 years ago

    by Mams

    Sweet n simple.. bt it wud be mre attractve to read if u break your sentence...
    Goodbye you've left for good
    I never understood why you had to go
    But although
    I had alot of fun with you
    And i know you will remain in my memory
    And i hope you remeber me and the times we had
    I would be glad if i see you again
    But i can't you will be in my prayer's
    And there is where you'll stay
    I will alway love you
    Goodbye.....
    Goodbye.....
    Goodbye.....

    good luck keep writing lindzie

    • 10 years ago

      by lindzie

      Thankz please write bac

  • 11 years ago

    by La Reina De Corazones

    I agree with pumpkin hunny bunny since this is a simple poem but filled with a lot of emotions my dear!

    Queen Ash

  • 11 years ago

    by Let It Be

    Saying goodbye is the hardest thing anyone can do, it means you have to move on.

  • 11 years ago

    by Mams

    Yeaahh i totally agree with sarah it really very tough to say goodbye.. i tried many times to say goodbye to the one i loved bt yet i haven't moved on:(