This is truly explicit, sensual and adorable. Makes me remember a fable written by Khalil jibran because you follow a spirit of being proud of what you got despite people saying anything for you!
Truly truly love this:)
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Hmm...you do seem to harbor some dark fantasies. But I cant pin point with precision, whether you are fantasizing yourself a sex slave to another human being playing the role of a master. Or is your character venting about her partner taking an advantage of her, cheating on her, but still taking part in sexual acts with the author. It could be the authors way of getting at him via being ironic.

Very well written though.

Great!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!it is so good to find a girl who knows what she wants and gets it.

Wow, a very intense piece! You did a really great job, it was explicit but not outrageous, which it can sometimes be tricky to find the middle ground.

I have to say I can personally relate to this poem, I feel like I've been there before, although unlike your piece, I ended up feeling very used. It was good to see an alternate side though! 5/5

"Good or bad people always have something to say!
Let them say whatever they wanna say...I don't care cuz m blinded by his love!" Is this the central theme of the poem?? Pardon me if this is not...! Lol
Hmnn...well penned!

Grrrr thats sounds hottttt
short but to the point 5/5