Wow this is beautiful!!!
Really great job:)

Lovely job on this one, I actually didn't think this would be yours, it surprised me to see it was. Nice job on mixing the 2 forms, you pulled it off well.

Nice poem kiddo...
Its inspirational and it made me smile :)

You got my vote and its in my favourites

Beautifully wrote a lot of talent here. keep writing sweety

Never allowing the suns
^ Never allowing the [sun's]

Wow Tony, what can I say, lol. That's what I call pure talent. Ha, three forms in one poem, that's like Superb!