This is filled with raw emotions and so painful to read, to think over it.
Amazing one,

Very raw. I can see the pain so clear in this poem. It was short and simple, but very heart-felt. My heart goes out to your friend as they are suffering from these feelings of sadness, because I used to be in the same boat. Still am kind of. But I really did enjoy this poem. Makes me feel not so alone.

Aw...this is such a sad poem, I can honestly feel the pain that the writer felt the word choice is simple yet powerful.

I hope your friend recover and you two get to share more happy times.

Great poem...

I hope your friend is fine and it's nice of you to share his work.

Awww..... it's poem poem full of pain....I'm sure alot of people have.....bless you and him.....great poem....

This is very well written, though sad

No word to say.
But good work & pain full poem

No word to say.
But good work & pain full poem

Agreed, good job!

Wow wow wow I loved the way you put it, it pulled me so far into the writing, wonderful poem