Comments : Polished

  • 4 years ago

    by Wild flower

    I hope you're alright<3
    Wow Im speechless..

  • 4 years ago

    by Amreen

    Xanthe, your poems are always a pleasure to read and this poem is powerful, it carries deep meaning and you put up a sad imagery here.
    Excellent!!
    Keep penning:)

  • 4 years ago

    by Darren

    Nominated

    As usual with your poetry you are taken briefly from this world into yours.
    So much emotion and so much imagery.

    awesome.

  • 4 years ago

    by Karla

    Hope things are smooth wherever you are. Stunning piece as usual.

  • 4 years ago

    by Mohan

    Awesome:)- i like it

  • 4 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Awww darling I'm so sorry for your loss if this is all a true write....

    However, I do like what you have done here..I like the irony is grey clouds blushing, and wintry summer....very intriguing, kind of vivid.

    What I'm guessing out of your last stanza, is that this persons gravestone, but I can't see, to figure out if you mean unpolished like its old and needs polished or touched up...or unpolished like its a clean slate and all the others are polished with long overgrown grass....either way that image is also vivid and describes such sadness.

    Your writes are amazing.

  • 4 years ago

    by Jaymi Lynn

    Absolutely beautiful ans so strikingly true.

  • 4 years ago

    by Danielle

    Stunning.

  • 4 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Grey clouds blushing and wintry summers.
    seriously? only your wonderfulness could pull that off.

    That ending ... </3

    Sorry my comments suck, I can't seem to write anything of worth, forgive me lol.