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by Cold Kira
Thanks for appreciating my poem..
Very interesting !!^_^ keep it up
Hi, I liked this it's really deep and has lots of emotion within it. Really personal too.
A few edit suggestions:
'can realized me.'
I think realized should be "release.'
'but i don't want
I think before mad you should have 'be'
Great write, Em