Comments : Exactly

  • 4 years ago

    by Skyfire

    Interesting...

    • 4 years ago

      by Cold Kira

      Thanks for appreciating my poem..

  • 4 years ago

    by zephelis

    Very interesting !!^_^ keep it up

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    Hi, I liked this it's really deep and has lots of emotion within it. Really personal too.

    A few edit suggestions:
    'can realized me.'
    ^^
    I think realized should be "release.'

    'but i don't want
    to mad.'
    I think before mad you should have 'be'

    Great write, Em