I am aware that there are some spelling errors but every time I clicked on spell check my computer froze so I finally gave up. Please have the kindness to overlook that.

I hope you don't mind but I nominated this poem for the weekly poetry contest, I feel in love this poem from the very beginning, I fell in love with the first three lines, they shouted out to me, your poem had so much meaning and had an extremely amount of emotion, which is extremely important in a poem, plus in my opinion(even though not shared by many), I like the fact it's a long poem, doesn't leave out anything, sometimes the longer the better, fantastic poem

Beautiful. The feel of this poem gets to me. I feel like i can feel your pain.