No, it isn't bad, love.
You should freed yourself from all of this.
'Cause you totally deserve it, okay? ^^
Thanks for the comment. I love it!
5 years ago
Wow! This poem is so sensuous, having good imagery from the beginning till the end...
The very first lines really capture the readers' attention and let the readers replace the main character of your poem...which make the poem quite a unique art and technique, and very thoughtful! Excellent work! Keep writing!:)
This piece is so true, I relate 100% and I love the way you made it sound. The description of drowning is perfect and saying its a relief from life is so accurate. It's a shame you had to know what this feels like, but I'm glad you found a way to explain it; that's something I've wanted to do so many times just never knew how or where to start. Excellent, piece. Wonderful job, though again, I'm sorry to know that you too are drowning.