Comments : Autographs (collab)

  • 11 years ago

    by Tara Kay

    You two, I love this.

    Beautiful, beautiful words.
    Simple but oh so beautiful.

    x

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I really liked this poem, great poem 100/100!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I really liked this poem, great poem 100/100!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    I really liked this poem, great poem 100/100!

  • 11 years ago

    by Rusheena

    Beautiful! You two knocked it out of the park!

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh Tony and Meme be still my heart!

    I have goosebumps... such a romantic collab! Beautiful

  • 11 years ago

    by Maple Tree

    Oh Tony and Meme be still my heart!

    I have goosebumps... such a romantic collab! Beautiful

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Wow guys, thanks a lot for the comments :)

    And Tony, it was so much fun writing this with you ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    Thanks for the comments guys , and meme
    The pleasure was all mine ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by ah satan 666

    @.@!!!

    Nicely penned collab guys...

    Has a warm romantic together forever vibe...

    "And there was my love, signed,
    sealed, delivered just for you.
    I let go of "me" so there can be
    an "us".. I had risked it all even
    before realizing the facts.

    But now I'm asking myself,
    was the pen you signed with
    permanent? I have replaced
    too many names already and
    this is the last piece of my heart."

    ^^ My favourite stanzas, they remind me of two people I know...

    This made me smile :D

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Awww, thanks a lot :)

  • 11 years ago

    by Baby Rainbow

    Wow this is beautiful. Great job you guys.

    With you there was no need
    to borrow a pen, simply all you
    had to do was look deep into
    my eyes for you to autograph
    my heart with certain beats.

    - the power of this love is just amazing, it shows how deep and connected the love is between these two people. I love how they can sign your heart without any ink. Brilliant.

    And there was my love, signed,
    sealed, delivered just for you.
    I let go of "me" so there can be
    an "us".. I had risked it all even
    before realizing the facts.

    - I really liked this explanation because it shows the facts of a relationship in that we do give up a bit of ourselves and open up in order to become a couple. This is a very hard thing to do because liked stated above - you don't know what the risks are and you could end up being hurt. The fact that you have so easily connected to this person makes the risks all seem worth it.

    But now I'm asking myself,
    was the pen you signed with
    permanent? I have replaced
    too many names already and
    this is the last piece of my heart.

    - this shows the doubt and the fear of past history repeating itself. You really love them but will they be another name you have to erase after tha scars are made. The mention of your last peice of heart shows us just how much pain you have been through before and perhaps been let down by too many peeople. It shows you want to trust them and trust in their love but you also do not want to be hurt.

    I'll give my heart wings to fly
    into your arms, so take my hand
    trap our love palm to palm. Let
    us sign our lives to each other,
    written in shades of invisibility

    - I am glad the ending is when you both are together. A really nice ending to the story because when love is this strong we do have to take chances. I like the idea of holding hands symbolising the trapping of the love. Joining together and making it stay there.

    Really good job you two xx

  • 11 years ago

    by Chelsey

    Such a beautiful write you guys. Seriously, love the title, love the metaphor usage here...love the part about replacing other names (Meme?) lol ...This shows how nerve wracking falling in love with someone can be after a heart has been through so much with other people. But sometimes we have to take that leap of faith to see if its worth it, to see if its meant to be...

    well done you guys, I thoroughly enjoyed this read.

    • 11 years ago

      by Meme

      Thanks Chels ;)

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    No lol it was me Chels , that's two collabs people thought someone else wrote my bit :p

  • 11 years ago

    by Meme

    Hahaha, the great parts are Tonys' and the not so well are mine :P

  • 11 years ago

    by The Poet Behind The Poems

    No!!! It all made a quality piece , couldn't of done it with out you