Angie...wow! Now this to me to the park..you captured the beauty and grace of the falling leaf....ohhh i love the repeating of the first line...this is beautiful....no changes needed..love this

Beautiful...I love watching leaves fall. This is such a magical piece...so graceful. :)

x Oh I love this.

This is so lovely, it shows how all the leaves fall in different ways and are all different in their colours and how they travel and where they land.

Such a peaceful poem and I can almost hear the wind gently blowing them from the tree.

Nice work

This was an interesting nature poem Ang...When usualy, nature poems are full of metaphors or heavy descriptions..I felt like this was jumbled thoughts describing what you were thinking rather than describing the sight persay...I enjoyed that!

Very nicely penned

This is beautiful the way you describe it, course all I see is snow, but this was pretty!

Simple, descriptive, peaceful...could envision every leaf falling.

You wrote of the beauty of fall and it's leafs that dance gracefully to the ground. Excellent imagery through words.