Skyler, you've penned a great piece which becomes one of my favourites of life poems. I love life poems to the maximum extent. I loved the topic, the rhyming and wording as well. The title is inspiring and the poem speaks volumes of itself. This is the first time for me to comment one of yours but it's a good start to read your poems my friend. I loved your style and I'm looking forward to reading more. Thank you very much for sharing this with us.

I truly love everything about this piece. It's inspiration, truthful, and speaks volumes about our nation.

The rhyme scheme was spot on, it flowed perfectly.

You may have never heard Bob Dylan's "License to Kill" but this poemhelped me to understand the depth of what may have inpired him to write that folk song

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Very thought inspiring, for where is our nation headed? Great piece, I thoroughly enjoyed it!