This is chilling. Dark and creepy. I like it. The rhyme is good except the last two lines. Maybe it's just the way I say it. Anyway, good one.
My favorite part was:
"I only wish you weren't so cruel
because then I wouldn't feel such a fool
for trusting you all these years,
and stayed through all my tears."
11 years ago
by DeviousCharmer
Love this love this love this ! <3 thats all i can say