Comments : Early Morning Rain

  • 11 years ago

    by Kate

    This is chilling. Dark and creepy. I like it. The rhyme is good except the last two lines. Maybe it's just the way I say it. Anyway, good one.
    My favorite part was:

    "I only wish you weren't so cruel
    because then I wouldn't feel such a fool
    for trusting you all these years,
    and stayed through all my tears."

  • 11 years ago

    by DeviousCharmer

    Love this love this love this ! <3 thats all i can say