Comments : Be with me

  • 11 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    Awe... This is sweet and sad at the same time...

  • 11 years ago

    by Aditya

    This poem has deeply touched me. Well done!

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    WOW, I LOVE THIS POEM SO MUCH, IT MADE ME ALMOST CRY, AND I CAN TOTALLY RELATE TO IT, I FEEL THE SAME WAY ABOUT SOMEONE I LOVE AND JUST RECENTLY LOST AND NO MATTER WHAT WE WILL NEVER BE THE SAME!! THIS IS ONE OF MY FAVORITE POEMS, GREAT JOB, 100/100!

  • 11 years ago

    by Michael

    This is a lovely piece. i love the language used and it also painted a picture in my head