Comments : It never was

  • 11 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    OMGOODNESS, OMGOODNESS, OMGOODNESS, I love this poem, I nominated it for the weekly poetry contest, wonderful poem!!!

  • 11 years ago

    by myonlymoon

    Wow, I'm glad this has been nominated. This brings to life a lot of the things that I have repeatedly done, I felt a lot of myself in this peice. It's melancholy is sweet and subtle and flows smoothly.

    I did enjoy the rhyme here and I like how most of it didn't have a formal form, which makes me feel that this is more REAL.

    Great write. Favorited