Oooh DannyKins!!! you can't put that you want comments not kidding dude and the poem is cute!!! BUT idk if you tried hard i know i'm selfish here but i didn't feel it oh i saw it since most of the time i'm like this lol but i couldn't feel it well a tiny tiny part of me did 4/5 from me Dannykins

Queen Ashlin

This is outstanding, so beautiful and the description is wonderful, I love how you wrote it and she is a very lucky lady that's for sure to have her face written about in such beauty and love and passion, outstanding poem, two thumbs up!

This is not a haiku. A haiku is a 3 line poem that has 5 syllables in the first 7 in the second and 5 in the third. Otherwise it's nice