Comments : Looking for love

  • 10 years ago

    by L

    I enjoyed this Poem, specially the ending. I know I sound cliche but you do have nice endings. In my opinion.

    I think we all go looking for love and this is one poem many will relate to. What I like the most is the way you tell a story while adhering to rhyming. ( it's kind of tough) specially that you manage to stay on topic.

    5/5

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading it, very touching piece, two thumbs up!!

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Beautifully written, I enjoyed reading it, very touching piece, two thumbs up!!

  • 10 years ago

    by Vic Johns

    Very well written, rhyming poem by Robert, although if I may offer a little advice?

    Perhaps:

    1/People are lies, what 'they' say is 'deceitful'

    2/Out of the rain, and always in my 'sight'

    Think this sounds, rhymes & flows much better, otherwise spot on!

  • 10 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    A very good message about love and the meaning behind it gives a sense of a deep sadness. The joys and pain of love never ceases to touch a heart...take care.