This took my breath away as it brought a tear to my eye(s), oh this is truly so sad! So heartbreaking, and you expressed your dying emotion perfectly, two thumbs up and HUGS!!!

Wow this sad poem i felt alot of emotion go into this piece the second stanza is powerful

I cant breathe
my chest is in pain
everyone sees
noone calls my name

that is truly sad you talking about being in pain and people see you but they don't care ive talked to you a few times but i feel that you are a nice and caring person i loved this peace&love midnight sky