A beautiful description of a typical summer's day, fading into an equal fine evening and the expectant anticipation of another to follow, very well written, rhymes & flows so eloquently!

Just wish there was some of that weather coming my way!!

This is soooooo beautiful, I love how you wrote it, fabulous writing!!! 100/100, I love the summer time, it's right around the corner now ; )

WOW i love the very words describing this BEAUTIFUL place and i really love the first line cause i REALLY love feathers since i relate it to wings and it's cute the flow was nice and the words rhymed with ever second line and some unforgettably the flow to that shattered but it's still very nice!