Wonderful poem.

Its an excellent piece, 'Centuries slipped by how long can the torment last?' One of my favorite parts of it.
Fairly well rounded, hopefully the rest of it comes out alright :) 5/5

This is a great poem. I feel as though I am the person with the bad memories. I know what its like. I guess this poem spoke to me because of it. The wording is wonderful so full of emotion. 5/5