Comments : Set Sail

  • 4 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Really good write people can relate to!

  • 4 years ago

    by Hannah Lizette

    Although the whole ocean/sailing metaphor has been done numerous times, you made it your own within a dream. I really like this. :)

    I love the ending! A short letter to your dreams asking them to hit replay so you can see her face... you know she is in the water but unknown of her exact location, so you wish to set sail towards finding her.

    Beautiful. <3

  • 2 years ago

    by Andrew Packard

    Wow! Great write!