I absolutely love the last stanza. This poem is full of emotion, which you expressed very well. Strong rhyming, an excellent piece.

WOW, OMGoodness!!!! Dude that was powerful, ripped my heart out that's for sure! your emotion was being screamed out and I love it! I adore the undead them of it all, really stirred up the readers emotions! And the pain was being flung of your words so immensely, remarkable writing! 100/100, and man if you need to talk to me sometime, you can, I am always here for you!!!

This last stanza is amazing. I love the ryme and the feel to this poem. its a great poem and the anger oozing out of it is just so overwhelming. 5/5

Mmm yes love sweet love it transforms
and resends.. It has the power to heal
and kill.. Interesting leaving splatters of
pain and yet shown within words the
beauty in ones soul the animal within
screaming, bleeding without that certain
someone.. And it's truly beautiful..