Comments : Savor Each Season

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    I have to just say, firstly, I loved your title! It was beautiful and that word "savor" is like cherishing the time we are given as well as change in our lives, hence the seasons..

    I like all the question words in the second stanza because that is what comes up quite often in our minds. Okay, so we're here, how exactly did this happen? What's next?

    Beautiful bit about the smile. Whoever we are, one smile can make a difference and if it's hard to show that happiness, they still deserve to receive one, even if from a stranger.

    "Dreams a reality for some
    For others they hide"

    - Well said! Some people do believe they can reach dreams and make these goals, but others are afraid, maybe it's commitment or the act of getting out there and living for them.

    "A journey of homage
    Success if improvise"

    - Love how you mentioned earlier in this stanza how we are all made in God's image, how true is that, we can always do better and we have that example of holiness and grace for our Creator..... I think in the last line "improvise" should be "improvised", it didn't make sense to me otherwise.

    Last stanzas were my favorite, indeed, as life goes on we will grow and realize these dreams are our own and here for a purpose as are we.

    Good write!