Comments : The Promise

  • 10 years ago

    by Mohan

    Sad in the end but this a wonderful poem
    so finally you said this is the plan of god and may be its fate.
    Nice written my friend..

  • 10 years ago

    by Poet on the Piano

    Beautiful and bittersweet story... how you loved and he lost sight of what you could be together. I love how you really take it into perspective that this man taught you to love, that you'll never forget that, but you will not settle and you inspire everyone else to "find your true love". To leave it in the hands of God and move on while still holding some memories if it doesn't go as you may have wished.

    Not sure you need a comma after every single line but if that is your style, run with it ... I was just thinking it breaks the poem up a bit when you still have that continued thought, but it's up to what you prefer. You still have good flow when I read it aloud I think.