Comments : Again

  • 10 years ago

    by Daylight Lucidity

    This is amazing. The sadness woven under and between each word is breathtaking. The idea of drinking as a solution to such a pain is dark and interesting. I like it.

    • 10 years ago

      by Amadeous

      Thank you allhallows eve!! I really appreciate your input! It really means a lot to me in this time in my life.

  • 10 years ago

    by Kate

    Hmm yeah, I agree with her. Drinking is a way to calm the things inside your head and sort of a refuge from feeling alive.

    Plays into the sense of dying. I like it.

    Definitely a lot of emotion in this piece and easy to relate to.

    Nice job.

    • 10 years ago

      by Amadeous

      Thank you healing Kate, so much. Really...these comments help me through and help me express the emotions that I do not show to anyone else. This site is my emotions. Thank you so much again for taking the time out to read my poem

  • 10 years ago

    by CathyButterflyJC

    Oh my goodness this is so well written and numbing of the soul, ti really got me thinking, fabulous poem, outstanding, I loved it, please never stop writing, this is so wonderful and fabulous!

    • 10 years ago

      by Amadeous

      I'm flattered!! It's been awhile since I've written, so your time to read my poem and help me out means alot, thank you so much!