Wow, this is incredible, I especially loved the first verse and the one with "You put the plastic ring on. .. ", this is such an amazing poem, remarkable!!! So much emotion and feeing, it brought tears to my eyes!

I really liked this poem this was pretty cool and i believe that you did well

I like this. The rhyme is nice and the flow is pretty nice.

But one suggestion, this is your poem and your style but I think the title would have more impact at the end of the poem instead of after every stanza.
I understand the purpose but the words are so strong and for them to be repeated it sort of loses its strength because it becomes a common phrase.
Just an opinion.

I love the story and the feeling. It's nicely written. :)