Comments : Evening's Eclipse

  • 10 years ago

    by JaneDoeWrites

    I can't believe this has so many visits and yet no one has rated or commented.

    This is phenomenal. I love the way your writing has progressed since I first started reading your work.

    "We trap ourselves
    in the travesty of our bend"

    This line blew me away, I haven't seen anything more true. We get so envoloped in/obsessed with our emotions, lies and lifestyles, that we get stuck there. We don't know anything else.

  • 10 years ago

    by Lifesbreath

    Wow, that is alot of visits and in only 2 days! I'm so glad this poem has meant so much to others.