Comments : A WAR NEVER TO BE WON: PART 1

  • 3 years ago

    by David Amenger

    Correct.A mission soon aborted.

  • 11 months ago

    by - Mr. Darcy

    Well done, this a mature poem with much to say about warfare. Shocking but sadly true.

    Take care,

    Michael

    • 11 months ago

      by Gabriel

      Thanks.
      I will admit I had much bigger plans for this, it was going to be more of an epic tragedy one of these days I'll have to go back and finish it.

  • 10 months ago

    by Em

    Another fantastic poem, Well done.
    Em