There is a certain mystery as well as passion within this write. Your choice of words and the imagery makes this read haunting and beautiful!
Congratulations on the win!
4 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
Again I thought this poem was very immense in the meaning and details you placed within. And again I feel like it could hold a lot of meanings. The imagery and wording are spot on through out and I agree it is pretty cryptic. But there is a deeper emotion then darkness I feel. There is love or friendship. Though at the start there is a subtle message it grows into something fantastic. The title of flesh caught my attention as well.Though I ddidn't know what you meant by it. I think you talk about this person who put you back or your heart back together with a kiss or love. And I loved the last line as well err stanza. You say love is a "sin" but you want to face it together. Beautiful write overall so well deserved to win. :)