Ever guy wishes a girl would write a beautiful poem like this julio is a very lucky man p&l midnight sky
4 years ago
by Beautiful Soul
Okay this is very powerful. I must point out that I thimk the title works well here. For the reason that the whole poem is about this one guy and you mention him in the deeper meaning throughout. Now the poem has beautiful metaphors through out that work so well together. They connect each line and stanza. The first stanza tells me you were blinded by love (in a good way) and it was hard for you to write about this person. This is not a typical love poem I feel. Yes it's love mainly but you added much more in. The memories are sad as well and some of the stanzas you wrote prove that. Like the dying in your arms one. I likrd the because I thought it brought a touch of a reality to the piece. The ending is so powerful! ! Love poems are hard to write and I agree it doesn't always feel like you are writing them but you did a great job here. You poured your heart out :). Very beautiful piece Karla! !
Wow, you just pour your heart out on this piece and i feel you have done your heart justice but penning a piece that just speaks to your love..i hope when your time comes, he stretches his hands ready to receive you.