Very good i loved it good picture voice was good just there whole thing good

This was really neat Luce. I like how you take such a common feeling (overwhelmed, nervous from this test) and turn it into something artful. It works for a poem where the reader experiences that moment. The "wake up" part makes me think of going to another class and waking up from the struggle of remembering, of trying to figure out what was done wrong. It follows us.... there are certain tests I think about afterwards, where I circled the right answer, erased it or even when I try to think about how I could have worded my explanation better. Some things are hard to let go and indeed, your brain can feel like exploding! You need to take a break or step away.