Comments : Acorn in a bed of moss.

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    This may sound awfully strange, but every time I read your poems in silence ( in my head) your voice is that of a man.

    hehe, nothing bad with that but I find it interesting. I like that you seem to focus on meter. It has this beat. But not just the beat, the content is thought provoking. Sorry, to not leave an interpretation, I could but I too have a headache at the moment and thinking intensifies it. However, I like your poem.

    • 4 years ago

      by earlgreytea

      I am an assertive person, which can be associated with masculinity. I feel you on the headache thing. ;P

  • 4 years ago

    by PorcelainMoon

    I found this poem quite feminine, in disagreement. This write flows gently into a beautiful little poem.

    Good to see you writing again.

  • 4 years ago

    by BlueJay

    I love the imagery and interesting feel of this piece. Creative write. Otherwise Left me speechless in more ways than one

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Outstanding.. I am speechless

    The meaning strong as a potential oak

  • 4 years ago

    by WW

    I really liked this. Very flawless and descriptive. It reads swimmingly. 5/5