This may sound awfully strange, but every time I read your poems in silence ( in my head) your voice is that of a man.
hehe, nothing bad with that but I find it interesting. I like that you seem to focus on meter. It has this beat. But not just the beat, the content is thought provoking. Sorry, to not leave an interpretation, I could but I too have a headache at the moment and thinking intensifies it. However, I like your poem.