Comments : Good Girl

  • 3 years ago

    by redxiii

    Very good poem and very deep. It made me want to take the creep, and ensure he never walks again or able to speak the words good girl ever again. Glad to see your writing. I hope you are doing amazing.

  • 1 year ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ren,

    This is a brave and powerful write that had me enthralled, choked up and enraged because these monsters actually exist.
    Your rhyming throughout is spot on, but that seems irrelevant considering the overwhelming content.
    This is excellent writing.

    The best as ever,

    Ben

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you, Ben!

  • 1 year ago

    by Marvellous

    The pain of innocence stolen _ couldn't but keep my heart grieving. As true as such sick ones exist, she's still the good girl, I must say! Let's speak up for these fragile souls; whose innocence are gambled on.
    Such a powerful message here. Keep bringing in the truth to light! Thanks for sharing this piece with us!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Very true, indeed. We must be the voice and strength for the ones who suffer.
      Thank you so much for reading and commenting!

  • 1 year ago

    by Em

    I am speechless. So many memories flooding back but you write really well, had me gripped!!

    • 1 year ago

      by Ren

      Thank you, Em!

  • 6 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    Now this made some tears escape my eyes. Yes, I did cry, Ren. I hate this kind of violence. I hate how the lust of the flesh destroys the life of innocent girls. These monsters create a trauma forever unhealed for a few hours of satisfaction. The picture of that demon saying good girl, good girl tore my heart apart. The story was so vivid.

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Aww thank you so much hon! I really appreciate you reading and taking the time to leave such an insightful comment!

  • 6 months ago

    by Brenda

    Ren, such a hard read. So many of these sick s.o.b.'s preying on young girls and boys. Brought back memories, ugh..You really did this justice though-well done-

    • 6 months ago

      by Ren

      Thank you so much for reading and commenting Brenda, I really appreciate it!

  • 5 months ago

    by Tony

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