Comments : Tip toe through the tulips

  • 3 years ago

    by Beautiful Soul

    I thought the title worked well to contrast the poem here. Tulips are my favorite flower, but to use something so beautiful as a metaphor is perfect. It's like they are crushing everything hopeful this child has in their life. To me this says, all of their nightmares are waiting for them to fall asleep. Like sleep is a very dangerous thing. Usually real life is a bad place to be, bit you combine the two together it seems. And the demons will make you "happy". Just like depression taking over your life, the demons come back every night to make things a lot worse. Excellent write!

  • 2 years ago

    by Mayday

    Oh my Gosh!!! I love this!! ^__^ It really freaked me out, I won't lie. Uber creative and vivid. I mean and I had no idea - but the punch-line left me like "Whoa o:" lol So entertaining and creepy and just awesome! Please keep writing!
    5/5

    • 2 years ago

      by Darren

      Thank you Mayday I appreciate your comments.

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    This is a superb piece of writing. Well done.

    • 2 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks Ben, appreciate you taking the time to read and comment.

      I don't know what I was thinking when I wrote this...

  • 2 years ago

    by Naughtymouse

    Well me old china, yet again I read something from you and it makes me want to punch you lol

    Amazing writing dude hopefully this one'll stay around for a bit lol ;)

    • 2 years ago

      by Darren

      Thanks Ben, no more deleting.............

  • 3 months ago

    by mossgirl19

    This is like a psycho thriller... Absolutely loved it. Let me add this to faves too.