This is so vividly amazing and so sweet. I see nothing that should ever be changed and even if I did, adding it would interrupt the beauty of this poem. Wonderful job and this is very well written. Each line is a masterpiece in itself.
This is so real and alive, sweet and sentimental. It shows with just a few minutes what one undergoes emotionally and how well that emotion can be expressed. Throughout this poem your voice is heard...another nice read.