Comments : 23 Minutes

  • 4 years ago

    by cassie hughes

    Sweet and beautifully written. :)

  • 4 years ago

    by Daizia

    This is so vividly amazing and so sweet. I see nothing that should ever be changed and even if I did, adding it would interrupt the beauty of this poem. Wonderful job and this is very well written. Each line is a masterpiece in itself.

  • 4 years ago

    by Robert Gardiner

    Lovely Write!!!

  • 4 years ago

    by Meena Krish

    This is so real and alive, sweet and sentimental. It shows with just a few minutes what one undergoes emotionally and how well that emotion can be expressed. Throughout this poem your voice is heard...another nice read.

  • 3 years ago

    by Arrabella of the Night

    Had to read it a second time. Loved it, so pure and heart left.