Comments : Anonymous

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    How do you feel?

  • 4 years ago

    by earlgreytea

    That's a good question. I'm kind of hungry right now...?

  • 4 years ago

    by Everlasting

    Hungry for? Food? Of what source?

    • 4 years ago

      by earlgreytea

      I do rather enjoy nourishment in the form of pizza..... XD

  • 4 years ago

    by moon face

    I wish I could nominate this tooo !!! 5/5

  • 4 years ago

    by Michael D Nalley

    Very clever wording that's deeper than what meets the average eyes

    The only thing I would have done differently

    "Big brother is watching,
    Little sister close your eyes.
    Anonymous can find me here,
    While mason softly cries.
    Illuminate; with false light,
    While the darkness here is real,
    I can give you proof of all of this...
    but none of how I feel. "

    would help the reader with the intended breaks

  • 2 years ago

    by Em

    A catchy little piece, well written