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That blooms into red and orange.^ this line is actually 8 syllables! I think.
I mean isn't orange equal to two syllables?
Other than that, I love the way you described the relampago. your descriptions allowed me to see it, and they made me feel like I was there when it happened, in that moment.
by Jyoti Rawat
Crack of blinding light.
White veins(layer) spreading across skies,
piercing(cut) the dark veil.(COVER)
Cascade(flow) deadly beauty
that blooms in red and orange.
I track all difficult words meaning in your poem, What ever you have written looking nice, just explain me its meaning.
by Meena Krish
Oooo..now that is a beautiful painting of words! Nicely
done. I was thinking what "Relampago" meant, thanks
for the explanation. Good to read your poem after a long time. Take care and keep penning.