Comments : Broken Spirit

  • 11 years ago

    by redxiii

    Sadly babe I know how you feel. I wish you never knew such pain.

  • 9 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Ren

    This is an incredibly well rhymed piece of sad poetry that flows beautifully.
    It takes real strength to face our demons, let alone do it successfully and then be strong enough to help others too.
    Great write, all the best and stay well,

    Ben

    • 9 years ago

      by Ren

      Hey Ben!
      Thank you so much for reading and for your comment. I appreciate it as always :)
      It does take a lot of strength to face our demons...and can be so overwhelming and painful...but the people I do it for are absolutely worth it.
      Thanks again and I hope you're doing well.

  • 9 years ago

    by Em

    Ren, this is a beautifully thought out piece because it's full of real, raw yet inner emotions that have seeped out whilst you write. The rhythm and thyme are perfect.
    Depression in such an hard thing to overcome even with the right person around because we want to protect those that we love thus hiding behind the mask (painted smile usually) but like you say once that person is no longer there our masks are able to come off and we can be full of darkness once more, unfortunately. You paint that picture so perfectly and many people (including me) can relate to this.

    All the best, Em

    • 9 years ago

      by Ren

      Hey Em,
      Thank you so much for reading and taking the time to comment. I appreciate it so much!!
      Depression can be such a hard thing to overcome. And you're right about wanting to protect those we love. Of course they are absolutely worth it...but it can take such a heavy toll on the spirit and mind.
      Thank you so much once again and I hope you are doing well!
      Take care!

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Life is Lessons In Failed Events. Lesson learned saves a future blame. Truth acknowledged is hope reached for. Within every scar, healing dwells.

    • 8 years ago

      by Ren

      Thank you for reading and commenting!

      "Within every scar, healing dwells." This is so very true!

      Take care!

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Life is Lessons In Failed Events. Lesson learned saves a future blame. Truth acknowledged is hope reached for. Within every scar, healing dwells.

  • 8 years ago

    by Marvellous

    Life is Lessons In Failed Events. Lesson learned saves a future blame. Truth acknowledged is hope reached for. Within every scar, healing dwells.