I asked my friend to make an account here so they could read me poems when I got sick, tonight they read me this piece so I must say before commenting truly, thank you for writing this.

The words are beautiful. Even with the slightly excessive length it still captures the reader's attention perfectly and it is penned stunningly. Your voice and the unique personality really shine through beautifully. again thank you for writing this it is extraordinarilly penned.

This is an interesting piece though the style you chose doesn't seem to do the message must justice. Amazing write and great use of mixing heart and imagery.