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by Larry Chamberlin Jan 9, 2015
Special events /
It has been one love's arduous journey
to say goodbye to black magic spells
and accept a wedding without you
despite the promise and it's aftermath:
that kiss beneath the rowan tree.
We were stealing a blessing we had
no right to - a romance for a nanny;
it was almost a fairy-tale:
make three wishes and catch a star
make it the topper ornament,
oh what a lovely tree, and
such a priceless gift, the card reads
"a home for your heart!"
Toss it out with the dross;
this holiday is anything but past
and the miracle is sold out:
standing room only at the lodge.
by Dark Secrets
The imagery is beautiful and the way you wrote your poem keeps us in suspense to read the rest... Just wonderful!
by Baby Rainbow
Lovely job on the challenge, well done for combining so much into it. I agree with the beautiful imagery of that kiss beneath the rowan tree being incredible. Really sweet picture. Nicely done Sir, nicely done.
Sir....I bow to thee....Amazing.
by Rania Moallem
Larry this is serious talk you know ? this is an amazing poem. I loved it so much.
It felt so close to the heart.
Kiss beneath the rowan tree,
a home for your heart... just fantastic!