Comments : Him

  • 2 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    Going to nominate this!yesssss jane yesssss u did the thing girl 😥😥

  • 2 years ago

    by Yakari Gabriel

    When u forget pnq still dont got emojies

    ooopsie

  • 2 years ago

    by Larry Chamberlin

    I don't know how to approach this poem
    I'm at a total loss. It is as if I stumbled across my daughter's diary and I read a page that both fascinated me & yet was entirely too intimate to bear.
    Your ability to set your soul out to dry in public is astounding but so much braver than I am used to reading.

  • 2 years ago

    by Tarek almasri

    Really touching :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Tarek almasri

    Really touching :)

  • 2 years ago

    by Ben Pickard

    Poetry should, in my eyes, move a reader in some way, for better or worse. Either through content, style, structure or use of poetic tools like metaphors and alliteration.
    This piece has all of the above and thoroughly moved me! An excellent poem. Well done.
    Ben