I love the format, the intense imagery, for example: inviting my immobile waxen flesh
for a last shivering dance.
Here we have the smooth 'nubile' body, cold and elegant, moving like a ballerina, long slender limbs outstretched moving like music through the scene.
The melancholy tone in this write just pulls the
reader along with the writer making her feel what
the writer feels. The choice of words used brings
out the emotions and images alive and it captures
the reader's heart. Its so beautifully intense but
passionately sad and the layout of the poem
gives a lasting impact like it reaches out to the
reader. It also gave me the image of the ocean/sea
who can't touch his love but can only look and
yearn from afar. I adore this...beautifully sad.